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Aoife · 04-20-2009, 10:24 AM

well, I'm thinking there's a better way to rephrase line 2.
Maybe something more like "your home or gym" or "outside, your home, in gym" something like that. Maybe even "we make housecalls" and not worry about the "out" part figuring most people get that you could train at a gym.
What are you trying to really say there?

04-20-2009, 10:24 AM	#13 (permalink)
Aoife ninjamonkeyqueen Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: City of Dis Posts: 6,539	well, I'm thinking there's a better way to rephrase line 2. Maybe something more like "your home or gym" or "outside, your home, in gym" something like that. Maybe even "we make housecalls" and not worry about the "out" part figuring most people get that you could train at a gym. What are you trying to really say there? __________________ My Etsy Fe Chick Apparel tumble log Aoife in Wonderland Werkit.com - Providing the most stylish training logs you've ever seen, while retaining all the function you need. Oh yeah!